played alone.
waiting is not what i am built for,
redemption is all i seek.
but i need it here and now
and i have no patience
for the promises of eternity
in the after-life!
Stuff that I always wanted to put down somewhere. And maybe even get some people to read and react to. Don't ask me why.
7 comments:
:)..well put.
True--it is now and right now.
You expressed it well.
You want everything right now? How about a diamond necklace for your wife right now? :)
well put...patience is not my thing...
what's ticking tho? deep poetry... anguish and spars and games and broken hearts...;)
Patience is a virtue....not in the age of "INSTANT"
as a teacher i shd possess loads of it....i do....unfortunately only in my classroom.
short and crisp....you have not tested our patience !!!
KUDOS
@ tys : thanks sir :)
@Ps : thanks... you know exactly what i mean!
@joy : yes everything right here and now... something no amount of diamonds can give me!
@TA : thanks. you are seeing a pattern which i am not :P
@gazal : i wonder if i would have been asked to stand in the corner if i had tested your patience? :P
Patience is an art...
You've gone into this well...
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