and feel out of tune,
and against all my efforts
fate seems immune.
i fall and i rise
for i am unstoppable
...
nah,
rhyme is not for me
it just doesn't have soul,
when telling it as it is,
is actually my goal.
i let you know how i feel
as i lay myself bare,
and if it doesn't fit into a metre
i really don't care.
6 comments:
I don't agree with the title...
Rhyme definitely seems to be working for you....
Nice poem...
:) could totally relate to that one!!
Loved this one...
you are good at rhyme or telling it like it is..either way we win
it is getting hard to say something other than lovely and awesome to your poetry :)
loved this one too
@ prats : thanks :)
@ ramblings : thanks. we all relate to poems in very different ways!
@ suma : you think you are not able to say anything new... i am not complaining! :)
thanks again (even if i'm sounding like a stuck record)
:)) *applause* that was niiice :D
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