 i lie on my back
 i lie on my backon this grassy knoll
 content watching the clouds
 as they form strange patterns
 in my head.
 a lazy stream gurgles
somewhere nearby
 as it meanders across 
 trying to find meaning
 through its wandering
 towards the sea beyond 
 the distant horizon.
 she's also lying beside me
 maybe dozing
 or is that her humming
 my favourite song?
 we both don't utter a word
 lest we disturb the 
 comfortable silence 
 cocooning us.
 her delicate perfume
 wafts across and mingles with
 the smell of the grass
 crushed under our bodies
 and makes for a heady mixture
 that i inhale deeply.
 i shut my eyes softly
 and now
 i'm at peace with the universe.
 
 
 
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i shut my eyes softly
and now
i'm at peace with the universe.
Like, in our childhoods. I wish I could live it all over again! :-)
Sounds like a perfect day!Liked it!
Cheers
preeti
Wah Wah Wah! just loved it...
of the silent harmony with nature attempting to silence the meandering thought stream in our heads :-)
zimbly beautiful!
Niiiice!!!
:)
@ I'm : yeah, just like in our childhood... we relive it in our heads!
@ preeti : thanks... waiting to read your poem!
@ divya : thanx :)
@ suma : thanx :)
Hey Nice Poem man... Seems that you are an exciting writer, I liked your way of describing things and outting your imagination into proper words by framing it well...
Keep it up and do write some inspirational poem or story...
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