Sunday, August 16, 2009

a peep into my feverish mind

boundless hope
unbridled desires
untamed passion
fervent prayers

primal needs
basic wants
ardent longings
urgent cravings

sharp pangs of hunger
parched throat thirst
and then this great urge
a deep inexplicable yearning

so many thoughts
swirl around in my mind
but i ride an ocean of calm.


Tys on Ice said...

normally i have no taste in poems..but i like a limerick or two...probably becoz of my lack of class...but this one was really cool...

Prats said...

Thats a whole set of emotions and wants put in one beautiful verse..

Suma said...

this was real good..

the last stanza touched a chord soemwhere...amidst the chaos of house hunting and school shopping and myriad thoughts driving me, i certainly look too calm to be believed!

Guruprasad said...

@ tys on ice : i'm honored sir! really am! thanks! :)

@ prats : thanks :)

@ suma : i think i know what you mean! :)

ramblings said...

hmm..that was unbridled for sure!! ;) and 'riding an ocean of calm' is what all of us strive so hard to do, but fail and then resort to poetry! dont you agree??!

Guruprasad said...

@ ramblings : from when did you start reading minds? :P