boundless hope
unbridled desires
untamed passion
fervent prayers
primal needs
basic wants
ardent longings
urgent cravings
sharp pangs of hunger
parched throat thirst
and then this great urge
a deep inexplicable yearning
so many thoughts
swirl around in my mind
but i ride an ocean of calm.
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normally i have no taste in poems..but i like a limerick or two...probably becoz of my lack of class...but this one was really cool...
Thats a whole set of emotions and wants put in one beautiful verse..
this was real good..
the last stanza touched a chord soemwhere...amidst the chaos of house hunting and school shopping and myriad thoughts driving me, i certainly look too calm to be believed!
@ tys on ice : i'm honored sir! really am! thanks! :)
@ prats : thanks :)
@ suma : i think i know what you mean! :)
hmm..that was unbridled for sure!! ;) and 'riding an ocean of calm' is what all of us strive so hard to do, but fail and then resort to poetry! dont you agree??!
@ ramblings : from when did you start reading minds? :P
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