Thursday, March 27, 2008

playing games

waiting is a game
played alone.
waiting is not what i am built for,
redemption is all i seek.

but i need it here and now
and i have no patience
for the promises of eternity
in the after-life!

7 comments:

Tys on Ice said...

:)..well put.

Ps said...

True--it is now and right now.
You expressed it well.

Joy said...

You want everything right now? How about a diamond necklace for your wife right now? :)

Thinking aloud said...

well put...patience is not my thing...

what's ticking tho? deep poetry... anguish and spars and games and broken hearts...;)

Gazal said...

Patience is a virtue....not in the age of "INSTANT"

as a teacher i shd possess loads of it....i do....unfortunately only in my classroom.

short and crisp....you have not tested our patience !!!
KUDOS

Guruprasad said...

@ tys : thanks sir :)

@Ps : thanks... you know exactly what i mean!

@joy : yes everything right here and now... something no amount of diamonds can give me!

@TA : thanks. you are seeing a pattern which i am not :P

@gazal : i wonder if i would have been asked to stand in the corner if i had tested your patience? :P

Prats said...

Patience is an art...
You've gone into this well...